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Pain. -------------------------------------------
Pain is always there,
in one form or another.
Im never given a break,
why not give it an end.
I smile when I think of the end,
weird enough.
Im nerveous...
short but nice..close 2 how i feel.. I smile when I think of the end .....sometimes we feel so depressed that we think the end is the best solution for it
pain is not always there, and if you ignore the negative feelings that feed your pain, then you can get on with life and enjoy, happiness. That how i feel. but your poem gives a lot to think about.
yes the pain is always there and will always be there... you must have true feelings and compassion for what you write so i ask you this... you said you smile when you think of the end... dont we all...
wow i like this i mean i can so relate to this. i have a poem kinda like this. especially the start it is the best Pain is always there, in one form or another
hey! i like this! but this is even somethin i have to work on! try to surround urself with healthier things that can make u feel better!! thats sounds really cheesy! but it could help! ~akaila~ good job!
Submission Name: Pain.
