Description: OK I was walking home from work and came up with this two liner. Evetually after trying to remember it and saying it over and over again in my head, basically playing chinese whispers by myself I was left with this and wanted to write it down in case I ever needed to use it.
On the way back from work... -------------------------------------------
You say that I made you dead inside
But you always complain of the pain within
*laughs* how can you feel pain if you're dead on inside? that just defeats the whole purpose. ... well, okay, crappy comment but hey, short work, short comment. lovely 2 liner
its short and so to the point its like being kicked in the teeth thought it was great keep it up i do kind of agree with the others on how it leaves you kind of stranded
The dead feel no pain And those in pain know that they are alive. You must choose which you are to be - You may not play these games with yourself Dead or alive iit is you choice Your life or death is not up to me
this was good but it left me craveing more its like going to a strip club when all you really want is a quick bang any way thats an odd analigy but any way you get what i mean it was a tease but the good kind the one that makes you go home and do the deed any way i liked this it was good
Submission Name: On the way back from work...
