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Please don't wake me From this beautiful dream I've always pictured You standing by me Take my hand Slip on a ring And with this you say We can do anything But now your leaving me This is the real deal Don't know what to say Don't know what to feel I guess this for real boy I'm letting you go But before you leave I want you to know I'll always be waiting here for you Always keep dreaming This much is true I'll picture you here by me Then I'll know you'll always Be next to me My love for you will always grow Even if you live in Toronto And this boy here is My dreamy reality That's why I say This is a real dream |
The Name real dream really didn't go witht he flow of the poem but it had a good idea for the poem. I really hope you and dylan work out cuz u need to get over Mylo. It's hard ot give over someoen as much as him, and I've noticed all your poems are about Passion and love. Well I got two challeneges for you 1)Write a dark poem about anger with someoen or the way you hate something and 2) write something that is kinda personal but is more of a metaphorical way of showing your feelings like my poem Coming up for Ait give those a try you need ot variey your poem stills lvoe ya lady =Logan= | Posted on 2006-03-13 00:00:00 | by in_my_suffering | [ Reply to This ] | |