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    dots Submission Name: Sum Thing 2 Ponderdots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 205
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 760
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1681

       It's amazing to me the interaction, the raw essence of this Life which flows from the words and emotions of this site.

    Every day when I leave work (my only computer) I carry the spirit in words of you all with me and I contemplate all seemingly glaring at us in good & in bad. All of my wishes, dreams and prayers reach out to yours and I am comforted by the purpose we all share but which we all don't always recognize.

    Some people say I say Love, Peace, Joy too much and I, like most of you, have endured since childhood such a madness; at times chaotic & suicidal at others so intoxicating....but we are each our own for a reason.

    This piece is spontaneous and may lack flow but all of our hearts were in it.

    I firmly believe in the teachings of Jesus and I believe his sacrifice in Faith of one was true and "IT" manifests itself in us and through us as intstruments. I don't believe as religion does that Jesus wants us to worship Him but to live and see as He did through his ultimate sacrifice. Love one another, uplift ALL!

    There are many greats throughout humanity and you, readers, are no different.

    I embrace as mother earth her humanity and to even the darkness I uplift you to Love...truly if you weren't special you wouldn't see nor recognize the suffering; recognize it, respect it and then repair it to Love!!!

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    dotsSum Thing 2 Ponderdots

    To all genius
    for whose word
    Elite is home;
    of you in spirit
    is what gives
    birth to poem...
    Prophets in one
    are we
    this I pray
    you see.
    Held captive
    by voices
    mimicking power...
    Tis fear
    of us
    they cower!!!
    Behind devilish whisphers
    of pain;
    only your loss,
    their gain...
    Loneliness, dementia, fear
    addiction, despair, disgust...
    finally suicide...
    In all this
    we suffer but
    we've already died...
    Our only fair-weathered
    the end;
    to death
    of self...
    and in "it"
    true, we all
    of body only
    but spirit
    too if we
    My war cry
    face the infinite
    I too seemingly
    human yet
    faithfully muse...
    Damn to demons
    in mind, society
    and religion;
    For they all
    feed off lives
    and indecision...
    And for all
    they have to
    give us they
    make us
    in defying precious
    God-imaged power
    they gnaw
    their own
    Jesus ultimate
    true genocide;
    for not of
    himself but
    in all
    he died...
    Sin not born
    of body
    yet all consuming
    The true power
    to be
    veiled genius
    So look back
    through the
    your words
    filled cryptic
    pages of
    1 mind...

    Submitted on 2004-04-30 15:26:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      geez for such a considerate poem, you've less than considerate comments. first off Jim kicked ass, secondly we've all used a line from some song by some artist, it's just a matter on how popular, as thom who realizes it. I love this. And again the intro adds so much to this piece. This site means a lot to most of us, I know me especially. And for you to be so selfless and considerate, well is obviousily more than i can do. I think this is by far one of your best, thanx for the read
    | Posted on 2006-04-01 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      Don't steal lines from the Doors, "friend the end." Morrison was an average poet anyway. And I'm a well-adjusted atheist, so I'll leave the rest alone.
    | Posted on 2004-04-30 00:00:00 | by Black Rock Tractor | [ Reply to This ]
      I like the ones that sorta write themselves. to me it seems that this one did just that. I really appreciate the sense of community and togetherness you evoke for all of us here at elite. Thanks soo much for your heartfelt words and emotions. To you my friend, much Faith, Hope, and Love!
    | Posted on 2004-04-30 00:00:00 | by Deep Ace Thinks | [ Reply to This ]
      Doors, or not...it's still a very good write. I feel as though I have been given a gift from you. Thanx
    | Posted on 2004-04-30 00:00:00 | by Deep Ace Thinks | [ Reply to This ]

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