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Today I spill my secrets All over this bloodied ground I spell my name over the wounds That no one has found My heart has been torn Cut into a million pieces The pain was foretold As was the tears and bruises For when love is forbidden It must never be allowed to grow And when the rules are broken Someone's innocent blood will flow For there is NEVER a happy ending Without someones final demise In order to achieve this happiness Someone's dream always dies But I have crossed that line And I know what the consequences are I knew from the beginning That the temptation wouldn't take me far I broke the golden rule And now I pay the price The blood on the floor From another cut and slice With every kiss I gave him He cut a deeper hole For the forbidden love in me Slowly took over my soul I was numb to the lies I was drugged by his lips I did not notice the blood stains That were causing me to slip I gave more than just my love But my heart to go with it And with every lie I created I slowly broke my spirit I couldn't hold on any longer My eyes had to find a way to cry And like history before me warned Someone's known happiness died The secret stumbled from my lips When my heart tore in two I couldn't take the pain no more I had to scream that I loved you I caused her the same pain I felt And you cut me even deeper For even though I gave my whole You still chose to keep her Now I lay on my hearts remains Trying to find a way to heal Maybe if I wish hard enough This will turn out not to be real I wash my hands in my own blood For I have paid for my great sin Someone always loses in the game of love And this time I wasn't the one to win |
wow... very emotional poem. Very deep... the rhyming and rythmatic patterns were good. I don't have much to say to the negative...I've been in a situation similar to the one your poem describes...it was hard. I won the battle, but lost the war. well, I've got to go now, but before I go...I hope you don't mind me adding your poem to my favorites list...well, peace.| Posted on 2006-02-12 00:00:00 | by night_angel | [ Reply to This ] | That is quite a poem. It truly comes from the heart. I think it is something we can all relate to. The poem rarely seemed force-it wrote itself in a way, am I right? | Anyway, fine job. | Posted on 2006-02-12 00:00:00 | by nodrelsnef | [ Reply to This ] | |