a job very well done. i liked how it surprized me..when u compared the mural to a guy,a lover maybe,and a relationship. no wonder y ppl like it so much..it can relate to the lives of so many people. and i guess it relates to mine but not much. nonetheless,i loved the poem. -dancing_alone
I love this poem, especially the imagery. If I were you, I would have added another stanza about the mural decaying because of the painter's procrastination, but the poem is great as t is, as well. Congratulations!
Excellent. Most of us go through this life as if it were a dress rehersal and we will get to the real performance soon. Therefore, as you say, too much remains undone. Life flows so quickly. One day you are twenty and the next you are sixty with too much left undone. This moves me profoundly. Perhaps becuase I have so much left undone. Lynn
TYhis one I really like I believe you are referring to how on this Earth we can never fully complete the puzzle of Life because our Life never ends We have another beautiful life waiting for us in Heaven and that is where life lives forever God Bless Ron