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    dots Submission Name: THE LURKING SHADOWSdots
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    Author: ShadowHarlequin
    ASL Info:    17/m/Etheral plane
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 22/31/14
    Words: 210
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 471
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       Did it for a DA competiotion, first post here in a while, hope you guys like it...


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    dotsTHE LURKING SHADOWSdots
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    Lurking shadows always there,
    The twisted shapes you cannot bear.
    The darkest horrors of your mind,
    Now you wish that you'd be blind.
    Ever returning again and again,
    Drifting from the other plane.
    Slowly revealing the darkest form,
    You know your mind is where they're born.

    But then there comes the saving grace,
    Light fills the darkened place.
    The shadows wither and disappear,
    The demons now are no where near.
    They have fled the world of light,
    Ran away and taken flight.
    Now you can open up your eyes,
    Long gone are the darkened skies.

    But the light is just a passing boon,
    Since it'll be dark all too soon.
    And once again they return,
    The cause of them you never learn.
    Listen now to your parents words,
    Those lost words you wish you'd heard.
    These strange monsters are not real,
    And your fear they cannot feel.

    Just grow strong and face the fear,
    It doesn't matter that you cry a tear.
    Cry them all out if you dare,
    Just aslong as you sit and stare.
    Stare at the shapes on the wall,
    See that their not evil at all.
    Just the outline of your toy,
    Go to sleep now litle boy.

    ShadowHarlequin
    25/11/03
    30/11/03




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    ||| Comments |||
      Definitely reminds me of my childhood fears. Nightmares of dinosaurs attacking me at Disneyland . Nicely done.
    | Posted on 2004-01-26 00:00:00 | by kblyric | [ Reply to This ]
      I have to say I was 4 years again, too. amazing poem. keep on.
    | Posted on 2004-01-20 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]
      0_0 amazing job man, thats a poem to remember, the flow of it and the factors of reality and imagenation just seem to blend altogether.
    | Posted on 2004-01-19 00:00:00 | by Trystam | [ Reply to This ]
      nice job, good touch on fear and facing it
    | Posted on 2004-01-19 00:00:00 | by brokenbatman | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow! For a minute there I was four years old again. It's weird, remembering how big a deal shadows were. The flow is great, the words... weave an entracing spell. Excelent job! <>< WorththeWait
    | Posted on 2004-01-19 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ]
      Thanx for your opinion, glad you liked it :)
    | Posted on 2004-01-19 00:00:00 | by ShadowHarlequin | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow! This is great. I liked the way the words were weaved. "Just grow strong and face the fear," - nice line that...
    | Posted on 2004-01-19 00:00:00 | by Judy | [ Reply to This ]



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