There isn't much say here ... it was a nice little write which quite was also straightforward and simple. I know that we can't judge a poem just coz is short but I would've liked to see more description of that moment that at times gets to be so awkward.
You had a good start though... let me know if you decide to make a re - write. I’d really like to see one.
Honesty is the best policy for me, so I have to tell you it's like one of those little cutesy rhymes that girls write when they have a crush on someone. Not necessarily a bad thing, but I'm just not sure you wanted it to go across as that. But that's what I got from it, and the meaning is pretty simply put in front of you.