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Submission Name: untitled dots

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Author:	RyukiTZR
ASL Info:	14/F/-
Elite Ratio:	3.94 - 133/130/44
Words:	42

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	241
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	306

Description:
This is merely part of what I was thinking about... Any comments welcome, but do come back to read when its completed.

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I can recall
The first time you said hi.
Guessed time flew too fast
And you left without saying 'goodbye'...

At the ends
Of an umendable thread
Everything's frayed,
Like the way we are now;
I feel so betrayed...

Submitted on 2006-02-13 07:13:51 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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WOw that could be really good if it waas longer, because there is so much to say along with that subject...but I thought it was great the way it is. Short and simple, I like it.
| Posted on 2006-06-19 00:00:00 | by broken angelz | [ Reply to This ]

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