Wow. That was kind of sad. This piece was good. i like how the end brings awareness about sexual harrasment, Its like its telling the readers that if it happends to them it isnt their fault, this is a lesson that is true in many subjects. Good job and if you ever wanna discuss things feel free to reach me.
Unfortunately, most teenage boys are ALWAYS thinking in terms of sex while the girls seem to be more into the RELATIONSHIP. It's the genetic mis-match of hormone-peaks that human evolution hasn't corrected yet...lol
I'd say unless the guy tried to FORCE something on you, try not to make a huge deal out of it...he's the one that should be embarrassed for making a move when you didn't want it...
sometimes you just never know. well written and I'm not sure if it's in sonnet form since I've only tried to write one and it didn't come out too well! writing form poetry gives me a headache. but reading it is fun. I enjoyed this.
I'm sorry for you that it happened. Your poem was not bad if it was your first sonnet I think. The poem had not really a deep meaning, and it wasn't that original but the scheme was allright. The story was told a bit in short, but it's a sonnet so it couldn't be any longer but if it wasn't i'd say maybe a few more lines. DZ
Wow, this is a really honest piece. Like, it portays the emotions and experiences clearly honest. And it is exactly what a lot of harassed people feel when it happens. It was extemely thought provoking, and thats is awsome. Issue that have been sorta pushed under the rug like this one need to be thought about. No one can really predict when thats going to happen and the who shock of an experience like that was dipicted beautifully. Amazing work. -TC Wolfsong