My Only one by LostInYerTears

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Submission Name: My Only one dots

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Author:	LostInYerTears
ASL Info:	14/F/Fl
Elite Ratio:	2.42 - 85/86/32
Words:	116

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	186
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	664

Description:
i made this in honor of the one i lost....not that they died but.....yeah

My Only one dots

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I can never forget him
not now not ever
we should've last
it was supposed to be forever

why did i carve his name in my arm?
so i could put myself in shame
so i could be depressed
or so i can slit my vain

i just sit here looking at the scar
i want him to live yet i want him to be dead
he'd feel the same
if he knew how much blood i shed

i slit my wrist
and cut my vain
i cry out loud
and scream his name

the scar is there
the damage is done
and i know he'll always remain
my only one

Submitted on 2006-02-13 15:38:37 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Honey your 14. Are you emo. or just plain dumb. cutting yourself over a man or wait i mean a BOY, is definatly not worth any trouble. you have so much life ahead of you and did i mention your 14. but enough about you let me tell you the poem was OK but don't dwell darnly its ok. in a way i kinda wanted share your joy and cut my self also after reading this.
| Posted on 2006-02-13 00:00:00 | by LLRDD | [ Reply to This ]
  i see where youre coming from. these poem is good, it feels like im the person in the poem, well it feels like im you. ive been there. stay strong, one day youll be able to put him in the past
| Posted on 2006-02-13 00:00:00 | by maybe_tommorow | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow, this is good. You have amazing talent for just fourteen. This might not mean anything but as tara lee said, dont let him win. I know how you feel, I went through this a couple months ago and it still hurts but you'll find another; far better than he could ever be. I want to read more by you; keep it up.
| Posted on 2006-02-13 00:00:00 | by Hitsugi | [ Reply to This ]
  this is an amazing poem...i can relate...i was with my man 6 years...i cut myself too...i don't know if you were speaking bluntly or metaphorically, but i did cut myself...and a lot worse...i know you don't want to hear it but he's not worth it...i still love my ex to this very day even though he cheated on me for two years...with my best friends...but stay strong it does get easier and don't hurt yourself over him...don't let him win
| Posted on 2006-02-13 00:00:00 | by tara lee | [ Reply to This ]
  this shoulds very emo but i still like it alot but for me i looked at it as a cut in my heart when me and my boyfriend broke up and thats how i realted to this poem
| Posted on 2006-03-09 00:00:00 | by Kaila Turley | [ Reply to This ]

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