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    dots Submission Name: Like He Told Me Awakedots
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    Author: Vagrant_AI
    ASL Info:    17/Male/Arizona, USA
    Elite Ratio:    4.13 - 9/13/23
    Words: 235
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 149
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    dotsLike He Told Me Awakedots
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    A plague of violence.
    A singing silence.
    Lies a rose that catches all light.
    Pick the repentence.
    "I'm out of breath..."
    A petal seen in only dreams.
    "I breathe in twilight..."

    As I'm blowing through you,
    Dismembered,
    Forever I
    Lay across the crux.
    A style of life.
    A feeling of flight.
    As I'm calling you
    Remember...
    A plague of violence.

    A pain of moments.
    A ringing solace.
    A comfort choking too tight...
    Darkness solus.
    "Bring on the death."
    Sojourn in all my dreams...
    "I see in white lights..."

    As I'm flowing to you,
    Infernal,
    Forever I
    Lay across your cross.
    A style of lies.
    A cover of night now.
    As I'm falling to you
    Remember...
    An angel of silence...

    If only for one night...
    If only I had cried...
    We could have this night together...
    If only for one night.
    If only I were right.
    Looking up to heaven...
    Fallen...

    My wings are burning through you
    Dismembered...
    Forever I
    Blame this cause upon
    A style of life
    A figure of "might have"s
    As I'm hiding in the stairs
    Remember...
    An angel of violence...




    Submitted on 2006-02-13 15:53:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This poem seems to dig a few feet deeper than the surface. As it stands, it is deeper than what my mind can even comprehend. A description would have helped possibly. Or maybe I am just not digging deep enough? Maybe I am not capable of understanding even if it came with step by step explanations?

    While I cannot understand, I must say it does not seem to be written without much thought. Maybe a little too much thought? Hah. Nah, never mind that. I am just not understanding. At all.

    Still. Good write.
    | Posted on 2006-02-13 00:00:00 | by slickviper097 | [ Reply to This ]



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