Description: Sisterly love...at first i had trouble thinking of a title i just thought of this title so yea.if it doesnt fit the poem tell me.maybe this needs to be changed a bit,but im not sure so if you think it needs to be feel free to let me know.
Sisterly Love -------------------------------------------
Cutting Slashing
a boy lives in pain
self mutilation
he slits his vain
feeling the hate
he grabs his blade
feeling no love
he watches his life fade
forgetting the past
he see's all the scars
remembering the pain
he cut deeper but went to far
the one he loves
lives in fear
hoping not to lose
the one she loves so dear
feeling nervous
she opens his door
crying out loud
she see's him on the floor
she sits next to him
and holds him near
sobbing slightly
she whisperes in his ear
"i love you"
he looked into her eyes
"i love you too"
his blood stained the floor as he began to die
cutting slashing
a young girl cried
self mutilation
as her brother died
i can relate to this poem because i am also a cutter and i've been to hospitals but they don't help. the cuts just seem to heal you when you're upset or depressesd
I really enjoyed this work.. it reminded me of myself a while ago, my bro found me on the verge of death.. it was my lonlyest time and im not too proud of it but yeah.. i loved it, keep it up
Submission Name: Sisterly Love
