Description: hmmm...well alot of people i suspect will be suprised by the ending...lol. But thats okaay.
She Is.... -------------------------------------------
Compulsions to excape
From this giant fear
Seeing it as fate
For me to get hurt here.
I know what I feel
And I think you know it too
But how you feel-
I don't know if it's true.
I'm so afraid to fee that hurt again
Afraid that I'll have to let go
So i keep it deep inside.
He didn't see how I cared
He left me after all
But maybe it was meant to be
Destiny that he'd fall.
Yet if he hadn't hurt me
We wouldn't have met
For I would have still been with him
If he wasn't dead yet.
I'd hate to be without
The new love I have found
My love for her
Turns me around.
wow... damn... i guess, in a way then... it's good that daniel isn't here... i mean, i wish he hadn't have killed himself... but at least one good thing came out of it... ME AND YOU.
Good one Reese. I'm finally commenting on one of your poems, so I figured this one would be a good place to start, eh? The flow is a bit off, but you get the emotion and the message through to the reader. Love the ending.
the ending wasnt that surprising but it was really good as i read your poems i cant help but think back on some of my past relationships and how through them i have met someone better but yet still cared about the last person only thing i found wrong with it is that you left out the l on feel you might want to read back through it and fix it
Submission Name: She Is....
