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    dots Submission Name: Tiger-Striped-Catdots

    Author: Imadjinn
    ASL Info:    17/M/Neverwhere
    Elite Ratio:    4.27 - 340/348/146
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 3158
    Average Vote:    1.0000
    Bytes: 614

       This isn't really a poem, but it didn't really fit under anything else.

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    there once was a tiger striped cat,
    The cat died a million deaths,
    and was reborn a million times.

    he was owned by people,
    for whom he didn't care.

    The cat wasn't afraid to die.

    one day there was a free cat,
    a stray cat.

    He met a white cat,
    and they spent their days hapilly together.

    but years passed by,
    the white cat died of old age,

    and the tiger striped cat cried,

    a million times.

    Then died...

    And never came back

    Submitted on 2006-02-13 21:18:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You stole this from the show cowboy bebop and left out a couple of lines so that it would seem original, it's in the final episode, when spike is talking to jett about losing his girlfriend julia. You should at least give the show credit.
    | Posted on 2008-12-03 00:00:00 | by nemomeansnoname | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, you gave me a message, so i decided to return the favor. That really caught my attention, the title. That was really, really good. Not exactly what I thought it would be about. I think that there is something more to this than just a cat dying. It seems more like a person who lost a love and died inside, but thats just my guess.

    | Posted on 2006-04-13 00:00:00 | by daughterofdeath | [ Reply to This ]
      It's very good, I understand what you mean by it's not quite a poem so I'm really not so sure how to rate this!
    I assume there's some kind of personal hidden meaning to it? I like it a lot!
    | Posted on 2006-02-14 00:00:00 | by irvine_valentin | [ Reply to This ]
      i absolutely love the feel of this. your right...its not really a poem. its kinda like a short story...only very short. but i love it and im not exactly sure why.

    was there a hidden message or meaning to this? do these cats symbolize, perhaps people? do the experiences in this "story" stand for something, deeper? or maybe something not so deep? it just seems like it has an alternate meaning. but it could not. who knows. i guess thats left to the reader to decide for themselves what the meaning of this piece is.

    but yes, good job. i love it!
    | Posted on 2006-02-13 00:00:00 | by vintagepepper | [ Reply to This ]

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