Description: This is about how my biggest difficulty in life is expressing my feelings. Most of the time I fail and it comes across completely different. So I keep my emotions to myself.
I want to write poetry. If anyone has suggestions on how to start plz tell me. I want to get into poetry because ever since I met someone I can't express my feelings clearly enough. I hope that poetry will open my soul to hers.
Well, nice piece. Your idea is not too clear so every one can understand it on his own. The words were good. You tried to use a natural rhythm but it seems to me that it did not work with you. The poem seems to me unrhymed more likely to be a free verse poem. In your line "Everyone listens, but none hear" there is an excellent paradox.