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    dots Submission Name: taking a riskdots
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    Author: darkestlight
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 19/29/12
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Misc/Happy
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    dotstaking a riskdots
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    I値l go into the world
    I値l do all that痴 never done
    I知 gonna fly
    I値l show the world
    All that is possible
    I値l be the muse
    To those who never believed
    I値l show the world- I値l fly
    I値l be the one soaring through the sky
    Take my wings but I値l still fly
    It痴 my faith that takes me so high
    I知 taking a risk- to feel eternal bliss
    My life is now complete
    Everything I wished for
    Is now here with me.





    Submitted on 2006-02-14 05:36:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like this poem it's different from the ones i usually read and from the ones that i ususally write and i hope to get a chance to read more like this,
    Brittany
    | Posted on 2006-03-13 00:00:00 | by twotroubledteen | [ Reply to This ]


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