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my insight -------------------------------------------
the pawns are upon the cherry hill casting with them an endless fate that drives their sanity.
along the ether comes a young pegan fool.
to behold the noble blood of a lost generation in the sweet twisted animosity of our god.
or to become the very virus of our fathers and feed off their very souls.
You could have made it a bit longer. But I did understand most of and understood what you were trying to say. I liked it. :) Good job. I liked it. -Miss
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