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    dots Submission Name: Thoughts of a Troubled Minddots
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    Author: Beast
    ASL Info:    24/ M/ Planet Earth
    Elite Ratio:    4.94 - 232/133/28
    Words: 207
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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       Just some thoughts of a troubled mind; mine.


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    dotsThoughts of a Troubled Minddots
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    "I don't really know you, and you don't really know me...there is always a chance that both of us turn-out to be fake...everything possible in this wretched world...then again what is fake? How can we decide who is fake? Is being not who you claim to be make you fake? If that's the case then half of this planet's population is fake! Can there be something else? I don't know...and I don't think I want to find out...

    We are simply words written to each other, then read by each other...but words are not emotions nor feelings, they are a mere attempt to describe such emotions or feelings...or maybe it's an attempt to imitate such emotions and feelings...I'm not sure...it might even be just another mask that we hide behind, trying desperately to hide our true identity...maybe it's the identity that's obvious to the ones around us, or the identity that no one knows about. Everybody has their secrets...everybody has their demons...

    But what do we seek? Maybe we seek friendships...fun...killing time...or do we seek something more? Can we be searching for redemption in our own ways? Redemption for things that we did...redemption for things that we never did...I don't know, but I do wonder"




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      Welcome back! I believe it has been a very very very very long time since you last posted here!

    Of course you succeeded in keeping your style containing some serious, smart and vague ideas! And the best thing is that you present them pretty well considering the strange mix of course!

    I agree with "Graeme" saying you answer the questions with more questions!

    Anyway, well done and I'll end quoting you saying; "Everybody has his demons but my demons have me"!

    Yousef Hani
    | Posted on 2006-02-14 00:00:00 | by Yousef | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmmm, you answer your questions with other questions...

    It's always nice to put your thoughts down on paper, it's good for the soul, I'm glad you shared yours with us, and reminded me of a few things that I'm always asking, too

    be happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2006-02-14 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      It seems like you have alot on your mind mister. lol. I can relate to some of the things you are saying. We never really know eachother and life seem so wierd because of that fact. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

    Maggie
    | Posted on 2006-02-14 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]



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