Description: I really don't like this one...but it has valuable information in it, so it must exist.
Side Note: "As he told me awake" and "The Rose Told Me" have nothing to do with anything to this story...jsut thought I'd tell you that.
Good God Zero -------------------------------------------
The balance brought by the most structurally weak minds of gods
Touching the only door with painted faces
Screaming out to other places
Am I on trial here for the power I want and the power I need
Breaking the barrier and smashing the locks for it's time for me to feed
You're still looking for the door in the space of all men were meant
Good God Alpha Star Sent
You're still looking for the door in the way that I all men were sent
Good God Alpha Star Sent
You need Zero
I'm just waiting out
Break The Bridge and call for the rest of it when you can't cross it now
You need Zero
I'm just waiting out
Break The Bridge and call for the rest of it when you can't cross it now
Seeing into the crystal ball on who now has the ruby
It was in my linage and then me
Why is it without him, Nil won't appear for years
You're still looking for the door in the space of all men were meant
Good God Alpha Star Sent
You're still looking for the door in the way that you were always hell bent
Good God Alpha Star Sent
You need Zero
I'm just waiting out
Break The Bridge and call for the rest of it when you can't cross it now
You need Zero
I'm just waiting out
Break The Bridge and call for the rest of it when you can't cross it now
He can't get too far out of the way
Send my orders to invade Precinct 9 to my trustworthy Vee Jay
I'll have this power if they have to die. Do you promise?
To be Death as you lie
Send mercenary to find Good God Alpha Star Sent
And tell her that destruction should be brought upon that ship
Either I am too dense to understand the complexity of your poem, or the poem is too dense for little old me to understand. When the poet fails to reach his readership, the poet is the loser. Abstruseness per se is not a virtue. Please try to approach your poem as a stranger not familiar with the internal coding which you obviously use in your poetry.
Submission Name: Good God Zero
