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    dots Submission Name: Because Of Youdots
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    Author: Hip-Hop Honey
    ASL Info:    16/f/canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.51 - 105/86/31
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 880
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 467



    Description:
       This is the Valentines poem I wrote for the guy I love..It's not all that wonderful but I decided to post it anyways..Hope you like it


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    dotsBecause Of Youdots
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    I've never have seen your face
    Only in a splendid place
    Called my dreams
    I've never felt your touch
    But I wish everday
    For your embrace
    I believe one day
    This will all come true
    And when it does
    I will hold you
    Kiss you and promise
    Never to let you go
    I love you more then you know
    And I live for this day
    Thats why my world still turns
    Because of you




    Submitted on 2006-02-14 23:42:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was good the shortness of the poem doesn't really account for this poem it was good for a valentine's day poem sounds like somehitng u would see read in a valentine's day card. I know how much you now felt for Mylo and I'm sry for ever questioning your feelings for him, and I kwno he is gone now, but if it is fate you will be together in the end Keep writing lady love ya

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    | Posted on 2006-03-13 00:00:00 | by in_my_suffering | [ Reply to This ]
      It spoke honesty. it was good. You opened it up nicely. It reminded me of when i use to look for that special girl, but never found her, i had a vision in my head, but no presence.
    | Posted on 2006-02-28 00:00:00 | by SinCeer05 | [ Reply to This ]


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