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    dots Submission Name: Love Is The Thing....dots
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    Author: Moonlight Dream
    ASL Info:    16
    Elite Ratio:    0.01 - 0/2/1
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 162
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    Bytes: 544



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    dotsLove Is The Thing....dots
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    Love is the thing that knows no bounds,
    That echoes from the heart without a sound.
    Sweetest only when heard from two,
    Like mother to son or lovers true.

    And pounding is the gentle rain,
    That nurtures the child and saves him pain.
    Yet remembers that the sun doth come,
    And again find comforts not to some.

    Though I’ve seen it from far to land,
    From coldest sea to hottest sand,
    Forget I’ll not, my love for thee
    And here it is, for all to see.




    Submitted on 2006-02-15 00:02:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love your peom! it rhymes I mean has a rhythmical pace. and It talks about love, I love it alot I would say more but what else is there, its perfect, it sounds like I could find that peom in one of the oldest best written peotry books ever thanx for sharing.

    Bliss
    | Posted on 2006-02-15 00:00:00 | by emoxday | [ Reply to This ]
      This is very good. It flows well, your rhyme is perfect and the story - well what can I say - love is love.

    Very well done and welcome to the site.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2006-02-15 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]



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