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    dots Submission Name: Until Death Do Us Part...dots
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    Author: sword stalker
    ASL Info:    18/female/home
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 27/27/16
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Misc/Comedy
    Total Views: 776
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 338



    Description:
       just a lil insight on Divorce


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    dotsUntil Death Do Us Part...dots
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    When getting married it's customary to say "until death do us part" at the end of their Vows. Does that mean that if they wanna part they have to kill eachother? And if they say, "till death do us part", why the hell are they gettin a divorce???

    in my opinion, they a bunch of Fucking hypocrites!




    Submitted on 2006-02-15 01:07:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you know you can spell out the f*ck word in poems on this site. just not on comments. so go ahead live a little. say bad words.
    | Posted on 2006-02-15 00:00:00 | by DBC | [ Reply to This ]
      very really Great great great good nice nice nice awesome I really liked it imagery flow very deep lots of emotions good job keep it up, keep writing.
    | Posted on 2006-02-15 00:00:00 | by Sethesin | [ Reply to This ]
      hey well OK i b'lieve u and trust me i wont say those words to my would b wife..lol
    nice humour and keep more juices flowin
    take care
    wasif
    | Posted on 2006-02-15 00:00:00 | by wasif | [ Reply to This ]


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