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    Author: ArtichokeMosher
    ASL Info:    15/F/PA
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 146/201/81
    Words: 202
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 199
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1309



    Description:
       This doesn't have a description,really.It just randomly came to mind while I was sitting here.I guess it's what love always turns into for me.Let me know what you think...


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    Old and sappy burned up bark...
    Lies on the grass in the park.
    Just like what love did with my heart.
    Tore it out and ripped it apart.

    Brown and burned up grass...
    Lies along the pavement with broken glass.
    Just like what love did with my dreams.
    Took them and ripped them right at the seams.

    Chorus:
    Love took away my heart and soul.
    Love took away what made me whole.
    Love took away all the happiness I have felt.
    Leaving a permanant scar...a permanant welt.

    Old,pale,and torn up dirt...
    Lies along the benches with tons of hurt.
    Just like what love did with my day.
    Took out the happiness and tossed it away.

    A rusty and feeble merry-go-round...
    Lies in the park thrown on the ground.
    Just like what love did with my life.
    Threw me out onto a rusty old knife.

    Chorus:
    Love took away my heart and soul.
    Love took away what made me whole.
    Love took away the happiness I have felt.
    Leavin a permanant scar...a permanant welt.

    The park was once full of beauty.
    Just like the angel that watched over me.
    But the angel cries...
    The angel dies...
    Tonight.




    Submitted on 2006-02-15 14:43:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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