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See past today and into tommorow

Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173
Words: 167
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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i have to be honest with u guys- i just put most of my poems up here.. so go for ur life- bash it- its a poso! so im not real gd at writing postive poems. :S

maybe shld stik to the negatives..

its where my talent lies really.

See past today and into tommorow

Holds a gun to his head,
Feeling the coldness of the barrel-
To him the world is dead
And soon so will he

But-Think a second
Turn on the light, Open the door
Life’s not always what it seems
Get rid of the negativeness forever more

When everything is wrong, and your on edge
Just get up on your feet,
Take a step back from the ledge,
Believe you can and you will

Troubles are in this world
People love, people hate,
Take out the rounds
Put it down before it’s too late

Dodge the verbal knives,
Don’t let it cross your mind twice
People must have boring lives,
If they are so interested in making yours hell

Look at it, think why
And when the time has come,
Would that reason,
Be good enough to tell your mum?

Shine within yourself and see
The glimmer of hope
Be who you want to be,
Turn that flame into a fire.

Submitted on 2006-02-15 19:59:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like this a lot. it's inspiring. I've been down lately. and..I'm gunna hang this on my wall.. It made me feel better.. and I think it's really good...hopefully it will help more people who may be feeling down or have just wanted to give up...I'm really really glad I read this...
| Posted on 2006-02-15 00:00:00 | by MyKemicalfailur | [ Reply to This ]

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