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    dots Submission Name: someone i will never bedots
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    Author: LostInYerTears
    ASL Info:    14/F/Fl
    Elite Ratio:    2.42 - 85/86/32
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Poetry/Mirror or Mask
    Total Views: 184
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    Bytes: 735



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       i wrote this today 12/15


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    dotssomeone i will never bedots
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    who is it i pretend to be
    someone who is happy
    but that ISNT me

    i try to be myself
    but i continue to be someone else
    someone who is happy
    that ISNT me

    i try to live a life of joy
    i cant live my life, like a toy
    i am someone never truely happy
    yet i try to be
    but that will NEVER be me

    the girl in the mirror isnt me
    its someone who is always happy
    yet i try to be
    but that isnt me
    i am NEVER truly happy

    i wear this mask to cover my pain
    i wear the mask to keep my sane
    i try to be happy
    that isnt me
    that is someone i will NEVER be






    Submitted on 2006-02-15 21:02:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Very insightful. I really enjoyed reading the poem. I also feel this way at times. Great keeping with the structure of the poem.
    | Posted on 2006-02-15 00:00:00 | by marie cooper | [ Reply to This ]
      great structure..and so insightful. i bet many people feel this way...and many more are truly that way...it describes me, everytime i look into the mirror...
    | Posted on 2006-02-15 00:00:00 | by Death_by_blade | [ Reply to This ]
      *smiles* To bring forth the truth of us all...no one has ever been themselves they all hide behind masks to try and show people nothing is wrong,they keep them from worrying at times but what happens when you can't take it anymore and you let yourself go?
    Anyways this poem is well written and it reflects upon us all...keep it up.

    -Leo
    | Posted on 2006-02-19 00:00:00 | by GuardianAngel | [ Reply to This ]
      i think that u did a really good job i liked reading it plz right some more for me to read keep up the good work
    | Posted on 2006-02-15 00:00:00 | by emptyness | [ Reply to This ]



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