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    dots Submission Name: La Beaute du Paradisdots
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    Author: wasif
    ASL Info:    18/m/Delhi
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 47/42/16
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 150
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       this piece has a lot of passion-red hot, yet still it looks so pure and wanted. chek out..!


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    dotsLa Beaute du Paradisdots
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    The paradise is in pride,
    The Beauty Today, it holds,
    An eternal object she is-
    The eyes of whom are deep-
    The body So Lustful-
    The lips So irresistible.
    Naked she stands in the dark,
    for a hand to feel,
    Waiting for a dawn, she wants.
    She walks on roses.
    So wanting is her presence.
    Her bosoms shine a twinkle,
    her anguish in eyes , overflow.
    She Commences...
    Down she brings the Abode of Eternity-
    up She holds her appeal-
    slenderly she walks- walks towards you..
    She is waiting...
    Do you want to Feel Her...?




    Submitted on 2006-02-15 23:07:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      o.O so i'm like the Queen of mind sex does that make u the king of just...sex? lol jk jk. Anyways it's very thoughtful and it has a lot of imagery..i mean alot. It had me on every word and it was just..idk good. lol. Anyways keep writting i hope to read more.

    ~~Danni~~
    | Posted on 2006-02-16 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]



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