I defiantly will agree with the rest of the posts. It was a very sad poem, albeit an amazing one. You use of imagery is very effective. Especially in the "Your face turned From green to red As the lights changed" I really enjoyed reading this poem
Oh yes *Tear* There it goes right down my cheek. This poem is awfully sad but beautifully written. Even without the rhyme and it has great structure and flow. The emotions captured in this piece were breath taking. *Tear* There goes another one. I know its hard to just give up something that you love but you get something really beautiful out of it.
Nice write. Sad, but so decriptive, its beautiful. It reminds me of that song... one headlight, or whatever its called, so sad but beautiful. It really expresses your feelings and emotions, in a way which the reader can truly enjoy. I havent read a poem this unique and of good quality in a while. Kudos. Keep on writing!