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    dots Submission Name: Love is Youdots
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    Author: silly monkey
    ASL Info:    17/ female/ somewhere
    Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 83/103/32
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 957
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    Description:
       IT"S ABOUT U EDDIE- lol- love ya lotz


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    dotsLove is Youdots
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    Love is you
    It's you everytime I see you
    It's that look in your eyes
    It's when our lips speak it
    When your gesture
    - whispers softly
    From the way you speak to me
    From the way you hold me close
    Love is all of you




    Submitted on 2006-02-16 11:21:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i think this is a really cute poem. perfect for around valentines day. it had a nice feel and it made me invision who i am with and how i picture them.
    | Posted on 2006-02-16 00:00:00 | by shayla8911 | [ Reply to This ]
      i really really love this. i can feel all of it. i am going through the exact same thing and you put into words exactly what im going through

    i really love this so much! you did an amazing job. with so little words.
    fantastic.
    great job
    | Posted on 2006-02-16 00:00:00 | by hayl | [ Reply to This ]
      Loving you is quite simple
    who woudnt love a glowing angel

    when i look into your eyes
    i see that im with you
    i realize that im so lucky
    to be with you

    The touch of you
    is purer then gold
    but the touch of your lips
    .
    ..
    ...
    words just cant explain

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    | Posted on 2006-02-18 00:00:00 | by UnHoLyPoPe | [ Reply to This ]
      I would say that this is a nice poem espeacially for Valentine's Day, It had a great feel of words. You did an amazing job with just saying a few words, that's great.
    | Posted on 2006-02-16 00:00:00 | by Gmann | [ Reply to This ]


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