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    dots Submission Name: Lovedots
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    Author: Gmann
    ASL Info:    19/M/WA
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 98/125/73
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Love
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    dotsLovedots
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    Love is like magic,
    and will always be,
    For love still remains
    Life's sweet mystery!!!!

    Love works in ways
    That are wonderous
    and strange and theres
    Nothing in life that
    Love cannot change!!!

    Love can transform
    The most commonplace.
    Into beauty and splender
    And sweetness and grace.
    Love is unselfish,
    Understanding and kind
    For it see's with its heart
    And not with it's mind!!

    Love is the anwser
    That every heart seeks...
    Love is the language,
    That every heart speeks.
    Love can't be bought,
    It is priceless and free,
    Love is like magic,
    It's life's sweet mystery!




    Submitted on 2006-02-16 14:40:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ahh im kinda weirded out by this, probably because im semi-pessimistic and cynical and even though im in love, its not exactly my sun earth and moon. its great and it did change me extremelly and it made me happier than ive ever felt but it didnt solve every problem i had and make me forget everything.. and it isnt easy.. i dunno this poem seememd a bit "new love" to me because it seemed you were overexaggerating love clichés we've all heard before.. it was ok just not really my style.
    | Posted on 2006-06-04 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]
      wow hun i loved this one, i totaly agree that love is lifes sweet mystery,
    keep em cummin
    kyrenia
    | Posted on 2006-06-13 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]
      It's a rare thing to see such a positive 'love' poem. Very utopian, i must comment.

    I loved this one as it's very refreshing and innocent when at the age 'love' seems a bed of roses..in actuality it's a different story.

    Keep up the positive write, is all i have to say :)..it's rare hence.
    | Posted on 2006-02-16 00:00:00 | by vedanta19 | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked it^_^You put a great idea into a worded picture that we all understand and it flows nicely.Sandman has a point but who is to contradict something we cant understand or control.Good write(you also have one typo but it just shows that your human and prone to minscule mistakes.)Keep it up
    | Posted on 2006-02-16 00:00:00 | by nosferotu_gurl | [ Reply to This ]
      i like it i agree with some parts but love starts when we are babies what we are shown we pass to others i am in my forties when i was a kid i was taught many ways that disagree with your poem but in life after age 40 i found a lot brighter side your post was great and very well written
    no bad intent on my behalf
    just my opinion
    thanx sandman
    | Posted on 2006-02-16 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      i liked it it was really good and love can over come all...i am glad that you wrote about love and it did not end up sounding cheesy as most poems about love do...nice job
    ~siara
    | Posted on 2006-02-16 00:00:00 | by poetry chica | [ Reply to This ]


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