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Just a Little Whore Doll

Author: Glassy Eyed
ASL Info:    17/f
Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 550 /427 /187
Words: 89
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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Just a Little Whore Doll

Just a fucking whore doll
Nothing more
pass her around
don't let her drop
but if she falls
don't bother to pick her up

just a stupid little whore doll
make out
feel up
no love or like in between
a quickie is all she means

to pathetic to really care about
not good enough to love
set her free now
just like a dove

release her from her torment
let her be sane
try to get to know her
figure out her name.

Submitted on 2006-02-16 15:56:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this was great if this is true dont let people treat you or the poems intent like that people label the image you portray
great write
| Posted on 2006-02-16 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
  lol (okay i'm a sarcastic person who laughs at..idk i find humor in everything.) and the end was funny. It's like a guy trying to get with a girl or just plain [censored] her (excuse my french) but at the end its like..well at least get to know her name before all that. I hate guys like that. Good poem.

| Posted on 2006-02-16 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]

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