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    dots Submission Name: Just a Little Whore Dolldots
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    Author: Glassy Eyed
    ASL Info:    17/f
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 550/427/187
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsJust a Little Whore Dolldots
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    Just a fucking whore doll
    Nothing more
    pass her around
    don't let her drop
    but if she falls
    don't bother to pick her up

    just a stupid little whore doll
    make out
    feel up
    no love or like in between
    a quickie is all she means

    to pathetic to really care about
    not good enough to love
    set her free now
    just like a dove

    release her from her torment
    let her be sane
    try to get to know her
    figure out her name.




    Submitted on 2006-02-16 15:56:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this was great if this is true dont let people treat you or the poems intent like that people label the image you portray
    great write
    sandman
    | Posted on 2006-02-16 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      lol (okay i'm a sarcastic person who laughs at..idk i find humor in everything.) and the end was funny. It's like a guy trying to get with a girl or just plain [censored] her (excuse my french) but at the end its like..well at least get to know her name before all that. I hate guys like that. Good poem.

    ~~Danni~~
    | Posted on 2006-02-16 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]


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