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    dots Submission Name: The Lambdots
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    Author: Ikahcook
    ASL Info:    14/M/Cincinnati, Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    1.75 - 2/1/5
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Story/Religious
    Total Views: 166
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 333



    Description:
       Although not technically poetry, this is a focused writing using exactly 55 words. I was assigned the task of creating a story with: A. characters, B. setting, C. conflict, D. resolution, using only 55 words.

    Warning: If you do not get the full sensations brought out by this poetry or the actual symbolism in this story, please do NOT comment.

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    dotsThe Lambdots
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    The lamb’s eyes flickered open. The brilliant light blazed from the firmament. Staggering to and fro, the lamb stumbled, head ringing with apocalyptic radiance. A serene ripple of voices lifted him into the breeze. Wings fluttered in anticipation. The All Knowing sat, glory gushing from his throne. “Care for a cup of coffee?”




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