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    Author: Ikahcook
    ASL Info:    14/M/Cincinnati, Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    1.75 - 2/1/5
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 135
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1073



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    Her eyes stare into mine,
    Forehead creasing with a line,
    Searching my every crevice,
    Is her one and only service.

    She reaches for my hand,
    And yet she will never understand,
    Her death would bring a smile,
    The weight lifted for one more mile.

    The pressure builds within,
    Popping with strike of pin,
    Building once again,
    Wasting blood and brain.

    How could I live with this?
    My life shoved amiss.
    She showed me the way,
    To her own bitterness and grey.

    I stare back through her eyes,
    Exposing my ruthless lies,
    Stripping and tearing her up,
    Pouring death’s final cup.

    Her hand falls through my knife,
    Bleeding away my fury and strife.
    The last tear falls upon my breast,
    Leaving her to a lengthy rest.

    Blood and guilt soaked,
    Her slicing always unprovoked.
    My mind now weightless,
    But never to be again,

    stainless.




    Submitted on 2006-02-16 16:04:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      o g0d, i hope thats not about me. I'm sry, i've been PMSing u know that. I love you and i would never want to entantaly hurt you!
    | Posted on 2006-02-16 00:00:00 | by TruDeath92 | [ Reply to This ]
      No, it's about sar from along time ago! I showed it to her too, later when the emotion went away. It was sort of awkward. She never had a clue it was about her. I love you more than anything!
    | Posted on 2006-02-17 00:00:00 | by Ikahcook | [ Reply to This ]



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