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    dots Submission Name: How Lucky I'amdots
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    Author: silly monkey
    ASL Info:    17/ female/ somewhere
    Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 83/103/32
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 862
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 649



    Description:
       Another poem about my baby :D


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    dotsHow Lucky I'amdots
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    It takes only one glance
    To be reminded how lucky I'am
    No girl in the world could have a better man
    One who still loves me
    - at my worst and at my best
    Someone who sees through me faults
    - and is not quick to judge
    A man who is faithful
    - to keeping just one girl
    One who wont get embaress
    -to scream out I love you
    Someone who is'nt shy
    - to being true to himself
    A man who can respect
    - the woman he has at hand
    It takes one glance
    To be reminded how lucky I'am
    No girl in the world could have a better man.




    Submitted on 2006-02-16 21:00:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      nice poem it is great, stays on topic the whole way through. Looks like you have someone and that is great so in the end let it be great.

    Like the way you put the title, and the way this whole thing flowed.
    | Posted on 2006-02-17 00:00:00 | by Gmann | [ Reply to This ]
      its not that your lucky ..
    leave that for me
    for i have a girl
    who cares about me

    not one to judge my faws
    not one to hate my mistakes
    no
    a girl who sees who i am
    and what i have to give

    your the reason i wake up
    your the reason i smile

    im lucky to have you
    why?
    theres so much to tell
    the way you make me smile
    the way you make me feel
    the way you bring laughter
    and it never seems to fade

    i coud go on for hours
    but is running late
    to make it quite short
    IIIIIIIII LLLLLLLLOOOOOOOVVVVE YOOOOOUU
    now
    then
    forever
    | Posted on 2006-02-17 00:00:00 | by UnHoLyPoPe | [ Reply to This ]


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