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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 338
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 608
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       I"m sure that nobody gives a fuck why I wrote this but I'll tell you anyway...I was feelin the side effects of some pills hard, and everybody asked me why I dressed the way I do...and well....this is the letter that I wrote for those people that pissed me off that day


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    dear bitch,
    this is the answer to your questions about me,
    I'm white, I rap, and dress differently
    but thats to you
    do I get in you grill about what you do?
    NO, not if you turned gay, or loved a foxing ho
    your business belongs to you and that I know
    I respect your's, you don't respect mines
    I got slap-a-ho-idas, and you'll find
    the doc's blade is even sharper than his mind
    next time I won't be so nice, I'll go off like a cannon
    KILL every redneck in Atkins, the first is E. Brannon
    man I'm trying to spit the facts to this
    I"m coming down from my high, and I'm pissed, so then I rap to this
    this is ridiculous
    redneck hoes comparing me to be a poser, my villians witness this
    so let it be known, every thing I got to offer is shown
    no more taking your shit, I"m pissed, depressed, and blown
    I do anything, about to get my name out now
    how about cutting chicken necks, I"m selling out now

    you think you know everything, well homie you don't
    you think you talking shit is gonna harm me it won't
    you think your redneck ways will rub off on me
    bitch I don't take off my crown, when uneccesarry
    This is the Letter...
    sincerely signed,
    a twisted mind




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      Good for you. Standing up and Saying what you needed to say... I look forward to everything else you publish! Keep up the good work!
    | Posted on 2006-02-17 00:00:00 | by xxxslayerxxx | [ Reply to This ]
      nice. not much to say other than i liked it, i feel for u, and you had a few gramatical errors.

    i like the idea that you won't change cause someone wants you too. if they can't accept us for who we are then they need to piss off eh?
    | Posted on 2006-02-17 00:00:00 | by sword stalker | [ Reply to This ]
      this is pretty cool. so i'm guessing that u live in a redneck city or town but u wear urban clothing and talk like someone in the hip hop community. [censored] the haters man. i'm glad u got that [censored] off ur chest. good job.
    | Posted on 2006-02-17 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      Geeze...I hate to see you mad and sober. I liked this one alot. the attitude in it. You stood up for yourself and would not others make you feel shame for yourstyle. Hey, I'm balck, whenI was in high school many moons ago, lol, I was told I was to white and proper by all the blacks. I would get so mad at that. But hey, I know who I ma know and that's all that matters to me. And I don't allow sterotypes to define me anymore. Yeah, I speak and write proper...I'm still Black and proud. I know this got nothing to do with you, but I thought to share this with you. I loved this and found no faults in it. You did your thing dawg...be proud.

    Maggie
    | Posted on 2006-02-18 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]


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