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    dots Submission Name: Unfreedomdots
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    Author: Ikahcook
    ASL Info:    14/M/Cincinnati, Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    1.75 - 2/1/5
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 213
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 454



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       Unfreedoms affect our world in so many ways.


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    dotsUnfreedomdots
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    It lashed out across my back,
    Flogging bone and skin alike.

    It ripped away long dead skin,
    Slaughtering new cells of promise.

    It branded marks of malice,
    Leaving warning signs of scars.

    It dripped of bile wickedness,
    Bleeding me of needed strength.

    It choked me of air,
    Gripping tighter with each breath.

    Unfreedom drove me to my death.




    Submitted on 2006-02-17 08:16:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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