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    dots Submission Name: Crydots
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    Author: stateXofXmind
    ASL Info:    18/F
    Elite Ratio:    2.09 - 29/49/21
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 235
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 477



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       yeah i got bored soi decided to write...i dont think its very good...but i think we all kno what im talking about...you kno when u like someone who doesent like u back and u try so hard and it doesent work...so ur tired of hiding from people who might like u...yeah thats it


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    dotsCrydots
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    in the still of the night,
    and all is calm
    i walk upon an open door
    and an open light...
    the light of your heart can be seen for all
    the beat of ur heart so steady and pure...
    you can be happy, you can be sad,
    and as for me...
    oh yes im mad,
    mad at the fact that you wont love me
    you turned me down oh so many times
    well no more...
    i will not hide
    i will NOT sit and
    cry




    Submitted on 2006-02-17 08:16:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like it ..it shows that we should be strong not cry for ppl didnt care about us..
    nice work :)
    | Posted on 2006-04-13 00:00:00 | by mystic_angel | [ Reply to This ]
      i absolutely loved this poem it reminds me of alot of the ones i write i can relate to this and i hope to read mny more of your poems
    | Posted on 2006-02-17 00:00:00 | by twotroubledteen | [ Reply to This ]
      i like it a lot. what can i say, i have to use the forbidden words:) keep it up like that:)
    | Posted on 2006-02-17 00:00:00 | by ParLon | [ Reply to This ]
      This is good, descriptive and to the point, I especially like the accuracy of recognizing the source of anger is their refusal to love. I like it.
    | Posted on 2006-02-17 00:00:00 | by papaj | [ Reply to This ]
      this reminds me of something...can quite remember what....this was a fairly well written poem...you brought the feeling out really well....straight forward...
    FEFE
    | Posted on 2006-02-18 00:00:00 | by darksweetness | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this poem. You have to wonder how many times we've focused on wanting someone that truly wants nothing to do with us, just to have something amazing pass us by. If they don't want to love you, screw em...they're not worth it anyway!

    Candi
    | Posted on 2006-03-03 00:00:00 | by dreamweaver | [ Reply to This ]



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