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    dots Submission Name: recieving deathdots
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    Author: k.a.b.
    Elite Ratio:    0.19 - 0/2/2
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
    Total Views: 165
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 956



    Description:
       i guess u could say i need sum help...i dont get it last year i was so popular, n i swear i wasnt conceited about it!!....but now im this massive loser who thinks that no1 likes me except my older sister!!


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    im letting go, no holding back,
    ur heart was mine now fading fast,
    im crying out, i want to let go,
    i didnt no it would be this hard not to say no,
    your standing there, watching, looking down,
    thinkin it was really easy to make you drown,
    nothings goin rite, everythings a mess,
    take another heart while u rip mine to shreds,
    my pulse is increasing, my eyes r gettin red, my pupils r widing,
    god i wish i was dead,
    get a new shiny blade, run it across my flesh,
    lets see if it cuts deep, lets put it to tha test,
    i feel sumin cold driping down my wrist,
    a nice ruby red comes running down my flesh,
    im feeling weak, im falling down,
    dont let me die, dont let me drown,
    i no ive done wrong i was just upset,
    i need to go cry i need to rest
    just let me lie here until my body goes nub,
    dont let me awake for youve already won




    Submitted on 2006-02-17 08:38:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      it's good although i would change no to know in the 4th line. other then that it's a very good poem i feel the same way a lot of the time
    | Posted on 2006-02-17 00:00:00 | by twotroubledteen | [ Reply to This ]



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