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    dots Submission Name: Am I Alonedots
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    Author: WhErEaMi
    ASL Info:    16/f/nc
    Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 35/38/24
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 1170
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    dotsAm I Alonedots
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    i get a funny feeling
    it comes form deep inside
    i get all mad and angry
    wanting to go and hide

    my doctor calls it depression
    my dad says its just me
    but the thoughst and feelings
    no one will ever be able to see

    some say im phsycho
    some say im just weird
    its like im a different person
    and the old me just disappeared

    i get really edgy
    i want to commit suicide real bad
    then i get a headache
    followed by feeling sad

    i wish i could get help
    i wish it would go away
    maybe if i keep wishing real hard
    it will someday




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      yes, yes, yes well i know how that goes i mean feeling that way with doctors and deppression and sadness anyway i like it flowed real well and i liked great write -jess-
    | Posted on 2006-05-08 00:00:00 | by gothicgirl | [ Reply to This ]
      great. i can relate. this is wayy awesome. i felt the same way. really, if u wish hard enuf it will happen. this is sooo good. i love it. this is a fav. good job. and i hope everything gets better. you are very talented.
    <3 kelly
    | Posted on 2006-04-06 00:00:00 | by bleedinbabygrl8 | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, awesome job! That's the way I feel most of the time, that's really freaky when I can relate this closely, I really hope you feel better and just for the record I don't think you're psycho or wierd, good job, keep up the great work.
    | Posted on 2006-02-18 00:00:00 | by luckyms20 | [ Reply to This ]


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