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    dots Submission Name: For Tomorrow may never Comedots
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    Author: wasif
    ASL Info:    18/m/Delhi
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 47/42/16
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Description:
       this is a thought for the mind.
    the last phrase "carpe dieme" is a spanish phrase meaning to hold the time.
    njoi the treat


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    dotsFor Tomorrow may never Comedots
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    Seize the Moment,
    For Tomorrow is unheard;
    Live your Life,
    For life is too short;
    Give your Best,
    For Failures see no Tomorrow;
    Dream a humane World,
    For the World is not for meek;
    Speak, Today the Golden words,
    For tomorrow is too Late;
    Laugh your way out,
    For life is a sea of Sorrow;
    Hold onto someone tight,
    For life shifts each second;
    Everyday,
    Remember, "Tommorow may never Come"
    So Carpe Dieme..!




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      This was very nice to read. I loved the zeal and intensity you put into this work. It made the reader motivated to heed your wise words. I'm very glad you took the time to express in a creative way to enjoy life. Nice flow, and great wording.

    Maggie
    | Posted on 2006-02-18 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      'Carpe dieme' is a very nice ending to this poem. I actually didn't know it was spanish. I know it in latin though, as carpe diem. which literally means: 'pick the day' (as to harvest it, make the most of it)
    Your poem was short, but said all what was needed. Nice job.

    Darth
    | Posted on 2006-02-18 00:00:00 | by Darth Zeus | [ Reply to This ]
      A very nice directed write. I think we all have one or two of these along this theme in the back of our minds, and it's a great form to present it in.

    I really enjoyed the Spanish version of CD, as it pulls away from the standard use of the Latin, which in thath case would have been cliché. But your use is fresh, even though it is such a small change.

    Thanks for sharing,

    Todd
    | Posted on 2006-02-18 00:00:00 | by Cigarz | [ Reply to This ]
      well thjiss was kind of nice and well.. i think you could add more details and some metaphorical words... i guess.. well keep on writi gç
    peace and love!
    and take care!
    Victor!
    | Posted on 2006-02-18 00:00:00 | by vitoko | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this on many levels.

    It is well conceived and presented. The words flow together and move smoothly.

    The meaning is one of the most ancient and mystical concepts. Tomorrow never comes.. it is a fantasy, and yesterday is a memory, now is all that is. Well done!

    And Carpe nocturne!

    Chrystine
    | Posted on 2006-02-18 00:00:00 | by beatthedrum | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a very true Write
    My Grandmother when she was alive would never make appointments or arrangements for another day
    She would always live for Today
    This is actually the Way I sort of trt to live my Life
    Live for today
    why worry about what tommorow may bring
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-02-18 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      beautiful thoughts on the way to live life..
    i've heard it said that when you have one foot in
    the past and one foot in the future, you sh!t on
    the present.. and today is indeed a present..
    live it like you say, and life is good indeed.

    thank you for sharing.

    peace,
    ~Cat
    | Posted on 2006-02-19 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]


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