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    dots Submission Name: Your Eyes will Always be Theredots
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    Author: KelseyJo
    ASL Info:    14/F/MN
    Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 15/13/12
    Words: 248
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 153
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       I lost some one...or maybe I never had him. But I'll always remember the times we had. His eyes were green...


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    dotsYour Eyes will Always be Theredots
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    It was your eyes I loved about you best.
    When I gazed into them I was hopeless.
    I think those eyes used to hynotize me,
    but now they're closed and no longer see.
    I think the day you left my heart broke,
    since then, I've been a dream and have not woke.
    The memory of your eyes are alway there,
    to erase the pain, I try not to care.
    Those eyes, those eyes, they glowed with love.
    Those eyes, those eyes, they were from ablve.
    You were everything to me.
    But I guess it wasn't meant to be.
    Your eyes were so blue, as blue as the sky, as blue as my tears.
    I'll never forget you in all my years.
    Oh, my light, my love, where have you gone?
    I refuse to accept your life is done.
    I'm struggling not be be selfish now.
    How can I live without you...how?
    Do you know how much I miss you now?
    Are those angels pretty?
    Do they sing better than me?
    Do they sparkle like th sun?
    I get so jealous I have to run.
    You were always there.
    To let you go I do not dare.
    But I cannot live my life with your shadow by my side,
    I'll alway remember you with the coming tide.
    It hurts to much without you here,
    I need to move on even though I feel fear.
    You will always be in my heart,
    and now with you, I must part...




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