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    dots Submission Name: Ice dancedots
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    Author: atonement
    Elite Ratio:    2.71 - 106/186/98
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       I dunno where this came from...maybe Edward Scissorhands... maybe not.


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    dotsIce dancedots
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    Angels carved of ice, snow dancing on the pure white ground. Innocence in the air, a presence that I missed. Little girls dancing ballet on snowflakes, melting memories. I remember the nights of the stroms, so peaceful and calm. I breathe in the innocence of the night. This night is my ice dance.




    Submitted on 2006-02-18 14:58:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You are right Edward Scisor hands inspired. This was pretty interesting with such a short peace// I like in a way... To short for my taste
    | Posted on 2006-02-24 00:00:00 | by Evil Jesture | [ Reply to This ]


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