Description: I don't often write to form or give much thought to rhyming my lines. So I am stepping beyond my comfort zone on this one. Five-beat lines each ending in a hard e sound. Still, to me it does not feel like a rhyming poem. Let me know what you think.
This is an interesting write Chrystine I had to read it 3 times to let the style and flow of the write truefully sink in This definately is origanel And I really liked the theme of this one It really hit home Great write God Bless Ron
nice, i like the whole rhyming thing, its sweet as hell and im surprised this was possible. i could never do something like this, so you got talent in rhyming. this had some emotion too and that was great. this was good.
Yes, you sure did step out of your comfort zone! This was very good. I think you did a great job with the ryming and you made the point clear to all your readers that this person was asking for her love to return to her both physically and emotionally. A truly good write.