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    dots Submission Name: Country Lifedots
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    Author: PolaroidMemory
    ASL Info:    18/F/IN
    Elite Ratio:    2.93 - 99/93/28
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 185
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       I don't really know why I wrote this one. I guess I was just a little too bored in History class. Tell me what you think.


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    dotsCountry Lifedots
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    The breeze blows softly while we sit on the deck.
    Grandma tells me of the olden days as the birds peck
    At the ground.
    Robins chirp and fly back and forth to their nests.
    There's no need to work, today is a day for rest
    And relaxation.
    The sun is slowly setting in the pale blue sky.
    Momma says the day must end, but I don't know why
    It gets so dark.
    It's a beautiful day for a walk into town.
    Momma takes me there to buy a new gown
    For the father-daughter dance.
    We return home and grandma is cooking dinner.
    Her famous apple pie is always a winner
    At the county fair.
    I love the country life and momma does too.
    We do things the old-fashioned way, but that's what we choose.




    Submitted on 2006-02-18 15:07:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Quite a good ole country story you have here!
    There's nothing like living in the country surrounded by cows, goats and horses in the pasture and sitting on the porch eating Grandmas apple pie.
    Smiles,
    ~Linda
    | Posted on 2006-03-30 00:00:00 | by AlabamaFarmGirl | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh, I live in a village, I can see this completely! A few stereotypes, but I take it that was your intention. I loved how just capture the lifestyle, like a portrait of the origins of ranch dressing or something...the all-American, back-to-the garden, Miss Midwest, county-fair-first-prize-apple-pie-passed-down-for-generations vibe. Anyhoo, I'll shut up now.
    -Mel
    | Posted on 2006-02-18 00:00:00 | by Melora | [ Reply to This ]



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