Palin Says by Lulu La Feyne

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Author:	Lulu La Feyne
ASL Info:	16/female/Australia
Elite Ratio:	3.59 - 72/99/30
Words:	96

Class/Type:	Poetry/Serious
Total Views:	238
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	600

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I am going to introduce you to Nova Waif, a tragic and hopeless character... and one of the first ever women to be used by status climber, Palin Lewis.

Palin Says dots

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We know by mathematics
That one plus one is two,
But if Palin says it’s seven
Then, well, that must be true

Columbus proved to us long ago
That planet Earth is round
But if Palin says it’s cubed shaped
Then his answer must be sound

When the sun falls behind the hills
We know it must be night
But if Palin says it’s daytime
Then of course he must be right

Sometimes I feel discarded
When coldness I receive
But if Palin says he loves me
Then that’s what I believe

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||| Comments |||
  I agree with Graeme
There is something about this poem that draws one into the mysterious
I cant put my finger on exactly what but it quickly does
This write also draws one to a lonely old fella who can easily manipulate ones way of thinking
A very clever and good write
God Bless
Ron
| Posted on 2006-02-24 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
  you said that no one reads your poems thats a bum but this one has a funny tune not ecxactly funny but its rhyme is simple. i like this poem its stellar lol.
~Audrey
| Posted on 2006-02-18 00:00:00 | by nightxassassin | [ Reply to This ]
  Lulu, I'm not sure if this was meant to be tongue-in-cheek...I found it a powerful little social comment that is very well written.

Normal day to day stuff, then your last stanza shows it to be a poem about total adoration for your love, so that if they say black is white, you;ll kill for it.

A stunning poem, I really really enjoyed it, and you should be proud.

be happy

Graeme
| Posted on 2006-02-18 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
  I liked this alot. The poor girl give up what is the obvious truth in order to keep a man, she know in her heart is always wrong and wrong for her. She is in denial to keep his love. She shuns the truth in fear of losing him, she is codependent in this one-sided relationship. I loved the way you contrast how far she would go to ingnore the truth. Wonderfully written.

Maggie
| Posted on 2006-02-19 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
  very very good. good rhyming...

i love the point you're trying to get across, it;s been brought out beautifully.

very powerful

superb write.

mud.
| Posted on 2006-02-20 00:00:00 | by Mud | [ Reply to This ]

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