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    dots Submission Name: You Never Knewdots
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    Author: hidden_cry
    ASL Info:    16/female/canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.74 - 23/25/13
    Words: 144
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 123
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 867



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    dotsYou Never Knewdots
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    You were a baby
    everbody loved you
    you never knew
    how cute they made you

    Your were a child
    and things changed
    every man was strange
    you didnt know what you did
    you were just a kid
    how could you have known what they were doing to you
    you never knew
    why your mom hated you
    she needed some space
    she couldnt stand the smile on your face
    it was her mistake
    that she just had to make

    now your a teenager
    and you cant stand your life
    you have to turn to the knife
    everytime you remember
    all those summers
    what they did
    when you were a kid

    you were so cute
    thats how they made you
    but now you turn to the knife
    everytime you think of your life.





    Submitted on 2006-02-18 20:17:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I didn't quite understand the reason behind the cutting, my thoughts were maybe the kid was sexually abused as a child...I don't know if that was what you were trying to convey or not, but that's what I got out of it. You should add more to it, make it a little clearer. Let me know if I was close at all:)
    | Posted on 2006-02-18 00:00:00 | by Glassy Eyed | [ Reply to This ]



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