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    dots Submission Name: Birthday Wishesdots
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    Author: disturbed420
    ASL Info:    20/f/wpg
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 36/35/15
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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       February 19th, 2006 I turned 19. This is what I want out of life.


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    dotsBirthday Wishesdots
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    1) I want to be happy. Not just physically, or emotionally. I want to be eternally happy with who I am.

    2) I want a safe and secure life, free of harassment, free of fear of an ex-boyfriend.

    3) I want to lead an impressionable life, one my younger cousins will see as imitatable, one they can look up to.

    These are my birthday wishes, wishes for this day.
    This is what I want out of life, somehow find a way.
    To make an impact in at least one life,
    to make a difference, not one with a knife.
    My birthday wishes aren't difficult or vain,
    I just want a life free of pain.




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      Before I forget, hope you have... had a very happy birthday. Belated Happy Birthday.

    Okay, this was so cool. It was unique and interesting to read. Your goals are sensible and I agree with them. Please take a look at something of mine if you have time. Thanks

    Abbas
    | Posted on 2006-06-04 00:00:00 | by abuzzbuzz92 | [ Reply to This ]
      this is what we all want and you put it verry nicely. you are so true whith your wrightings so true indeed . im sorry if my comment seems boaring but im tired any way i liked this pice good job

    xoxo
    that girl
    | Posted on 2006-02-19 00:00:00 | by sweet sorenity | [ Reply to This ]
      Happy Birthday!

    Yes, I think we all want happiness... but some of us search and search and search for some unattainable glory that they couldn't even recognise, while some people see something mundane and ever-present and think, Wow. This is Happiness.

    Eh, thoughts for your birthday. Yay! ~Cora
    | Posted on 2006-02-19 00:00:00 | by Cora Windover | [ Reply to This ]
      I have this same wish
    I only hope that my writings can touch someone so they do not have to go thru life in Pain
    Pain can actually be conquered by Positive thinking
    I know this because I do this every day
    It is a way of life for me
    God Bless
    and
    May this Birthday be the first of many more free of Pain
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-02-19 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      How many people I wonder, wish for a life free of pain and get their dreams smashed into their faces.

    (Happy birthday, by the by! ^_^ *muffin tossing*)

    This is a list of hopes I also have a wish for. I wish I could grant them, but then so many wish for the same things. I know I do, all the time. Not so much with the boyfriend, I want mine back at all costs, but I understand everything else. Keep your chin up and strive to make life better; I guarantee that it will work if you press forward through the trials and situations life will present you with.

    Happy Christmas and Merry Birthday. O.o
    Kichi
    | Posted on 2006-02-20 00:00:00 | by Raging Rain | [ Reply to This ]
      #3 what a beautiful goal.
    i remember when i was about 8 thinking that i needed to do whatever i could to be a good example for my little brother...i've never forgotten that, it's a constant and daily motivator...i hope it's the same with you.

    happy (belated) birthday :)
    | Posted on 2006-02-20 00:00:00 | by treybur | [ Reply to This ]


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