This is very interesting.What i get from the poem is someone asked you to marry them and you said no.And you just wanted to be friends with this guy but he wanted to be more.I can totally relate to that because the same thing happened to me.But this poem is not [censored] its really good.And i enjoyed reading it.You expressed yourself in a good way.Writing is the best thing for some people to do.Great job!
hmm. interesting poem. It seem that there is someone who ..likes you? or looks up to you and you just cant give them what they want..Something like that. I liked it, it was expressive and ..well its a good thing to let your feelings out. Sometimes people just dont see. inkpen
There were some mispelled words and words that were out of place. Overall this poem has the feelings but it isnt as thought out as it should be. This could be writen so much better if you just give your mind time to analize these thoughts into one overwhelming emotion. From there masterful writes can be concieved. I did like this though.
Sweet!(exscuse the lame pun on the name). Appologizing for whom you are, there's something i can relate to. First off it's not shyt! As a matter of fact it's damn near my favorite. IT shows a great deal of growth just in the expansion from beginning to end, and the ability to comfront it like that, is extremely commendable. Personally i feel everything happens for a reason. by people going to you for advice or what have you, it makes you take a look at yourself, and maybe theres something underlying there that you wouldn't have found other wise. I'm speaking from experience, also not to sound like your dad, but only you can blame yourself for what you do, hope your better, take care