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    dots Submission Name: not suredots
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    Author: Dragonslayer
    ASL Info:    22/M/MI
    Elite Ratio:    4.17 - 43/39/21
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Rant/Misc
    Total Views: 235
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 765



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       didn't know what to call it, but here it is. i just wanted to rant, really.


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    why does life always come back to bite me? why do i always have to be completely alone? why do i have to keep walking, and smiling, just to please people? why must i always let others be happy, while allowing my own happiness to faulter, and lose it's flame? why must i always have to fight to live; to see another sun raise; to see another pretty face i cannot have? why must i feel more and more pain, even though i have reached my limit? why must i live with the things that i know, and cannot tell anyone else? why must i keep on pushing myself, over the edge? why must i keep going, when no one wants me? why must i live on, without knowing true love? why must i always listen to other people's problems, but cannot tell people mine?





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      Intresting write,
    Those are many questions of which no human ahs yet answered,
    We are always looking for closure, for some sort of comfort.
    Yet like you said "life come backs to bite you" The more you long for something this less pleasurable it becomes, ironic don't you think?
    Your poem has taken my thoughts and places them on paper, I could never find the proper way for me to express those feelings
    You did it with great promise

    I hope to see and read more

    x0x Mickey x0x
    | Posted on 2006-02-19 00:00:00 | by Drain_my_Blood | [ Reply to This ]
      You and I truly must be long lost blood siblings, or something to that.

    I feel the exact same stinking way.

    People are always asking me for help, me for advice, me to see if this guy likes that girl, me for a shoulder, me me me...but I never seem to get help when I need it. And I'm hurt, wishing for my dear one back, and insanely tired.

    I know exactly where you are coming from. I hope maybe we can talk or understand each other.

    (Oh, by the way...uh...I was trying to avoid saying this...but...yes, well, the grammatical corrections need to be made. Sorry! ^_^')

    Kichi
    | Posted on 2006-02-20 00:00:00 | by Raging Rain | [ Reply to This ]
      I understand the feeling. Been there, my friend. But you are too young to be thinking like this. Get out and meet some people. Nineteen is just a beginning; things will get better. You don't even know what you don't know yet. Take advice from someone who was just like you at that age.

    Peace,

    Joe
    | Posted on 2006-02-20 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]



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