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    dots Submission Name: Falling Apartdots
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    Author: T.O.S.R.
    ASL Info:    16/F/Utah
    Elite Ratio:    4.04 - 53/53/15
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
    Total Views: 264
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 431



    Description:
       I've had this lying around for quite some time now, and I thought maybe I'd post it... It doesn't apply anymore, but I still like it.


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    dotsFalling Apartdots
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    They call her for dinner
    She makes up a reason
    She looks at her arms
    and rolls down her sleeves.

    Her mother is starting
    to see through her lies,
    and lost night her father
    had tears in his eyes.

    They rise in the morning
    and sleep in the dark,
    and even though nobody's looking,
    she's falling apart.

    ~Author Unknown~




    Submitted on 2006-02-19 22:24:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      oh really good, i know how you feel and your poetry is strong in showing that. Cutting is bad we all know that but sometimes you cannot help feel this way, you need something to help you escape. I wonder if you still do it? if im not intruding. I agree with you I like this piece and i wouldnt change it in any way.

    good job
    andrea
    | Posted on 2006-02-19 00:00:00 | by ladydeathstrike | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow..For as short as it is...Its amazing. It conveys alot of emotion without that many words. I can relate to it. I used to cut and this is exactly how it went for me. Good job!
    </3
    | Posted on 2006-02-21 00:00:00 | by FalnAnglAstrael | [ Reply to This ]



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